Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Blogging today at the PHS

My post advocatining visiting the Norwegian fjords is up today at the Pink Heart Society.

I am knee deep in revisions but the story is becoming better. I seem to have suffered from my usual scourge of repetition with this manuscript. When will I learn that repetition kills pace!

1 comment:

Unknown said...

I'm at roughly the same stage Michelle, and suffering from the same ailment.

Why is it that each book seems to have its own 'phrase of the month'?
And, more to the point, why aren't we aware of it as we're writing it? You'd have thought my brain would have noticed my fingers typing the same phrase for the three hundredth time...