Still doing the revisions but the story is getting better. Some stories are like that. I had done something and it sucked the likfe out of the story, but a bit of judicous cutting , the life and tension are back.
Sometimes it is better to withhold information until the point it will have the most impact.
It will be finished in the next couple of days. Then I have more revisions to do on the Roman Undone. In theory they should be quick.